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Wednesday, 2 November 2016

WALT: persuade Miss Nicola to join us and come visit a country we want to go to.

Come with me to Aogashima where the views are stunning and the jungles are peaceful and adventurous. It's a magical place with majestic forests and relaxing and fantastic monuments with mysterious colours. The plants are magnificent and they have breathtaking colour in them. It has fabulous tropical fresh fruit and spectacular palm trees. There's roast outs at night and parties around the fire. Come with me to Aogashima!

By BJ

6 comments:

  1. great writing BJ i liked it was a stunning and the relaxing and fantastic monuments spectacular palm trees in the jungle

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  2. great writing BJ i liked it was a stunning and the relaxing and fantastic monuments spectacular palm trees in the jungle

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  3. I like that I used lots of descriptions of the surroundings and described the places to

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