Lacey and I ran to grab our model duster plane. The control looked weird, so many buttons. I found the gear stick. It was a maze in there. There was five different key holes in the plane console. I forgot to label the keyholes. I’m so dumb. So, I told Lacey that she could pull the lever. I was going to stay on the duster to see what happened next. I saw I had shrunk. Lacey couldn’t hear me and she was 500 ft tall. Not cool!
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ReplyDeleteLacey and I ran to grab our model duster plane. The control looked weird, so many buttons. I found the gear stick. It was a maze in there. There was five different key holes in the plane console. I forgot to label the keyholes. I’m so dumb. So, I told Lacey that she could pull the lever. I was going to stay on the duster to see what happened next. I saw I had shrunk. Lacey couldn’t hear me and she was 500 ft tall. Not cool!
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